Descriptive Observational Study of Tdap Vaccination Adhesion in Pregnant Women in the Florentine Area (Tuscany, Italy) in 2019 and 2020
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Descriptive Observational Study of Tdap Vaccination 2 Adhesion in Pregnant Women in the Florentine Area 3 (Tuscany, Italy) in 2019 and 2020
This study is interesting. I have detected these small minor changes in the manuscript. There are some statistical aspects, which should be correct it before the final acceptation. Please, remove ages from 17-19 years old in all tables since n=9 is not representative here.
My Decision is Minnor revision
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-Why these authors indicate data from The highest rates of pertussis in infants 60 were reported in Austria (180.4 cases/100 000), followed by Iceland (146.6), Slovenia 61 (123.6) and Denmark (121.5). Infants represented 6% of all cases reported; among those in 62 which the month of age was known (87%), 65% were under six months old and 45% were 63 under three months old [3]. Which is the reason of the lack of data from more representative European countries in vaccunation? Are important these data from Slovenia in terms of vaccunation?
-In my opinion, these data from 17-19 years old should be removed from the table given the extremely low size sampe (n=9) and also remove data from N.D in this table (also in table 2: remove it N.D data)
-Please, include S.E.M (error standard media) in graph of percentages and also remove the age group between 17-19 years old.
-Include S.E.M (error standard media in tfigure 2, which is the variance divided by roof of n, being n the size sample and put * in case of significance between groups.
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Reviewer 2 Report
In this manuscript, the authors study the adhesion to Tdap vaccination of pregnant women in Florentine area according several socio-demographic parameters. The work is interesting and shows a clear evolution from previous study in Italy before government recommendations (ref 20).
There are several minor points which can be amended.
- There are several missing data, mentioned in lines 143, 150 and 157 though in Table 1 most of the information has been collected with low proportion of N.D. category. What is the origin of the missing data? Is it a problem with consent of personal data collection?
- The proportion of vaccinated women with specific information not detected is important. Does is have an influence on the conclusions drawn with vaccinated women with specific information collected?
- The authors could discuss the impact of vaccination recommendations. The study cited in ref 20 was done before such recommendations and the vaccination level among pregnant women was lower.
- Small typos errors:
- In table 1, there are shifts in lines alignment for No of previous VTP and No. of visits during pregnancy.
- Line 112. “While Tdap vaccination…”. “While” seems dispensable.
- Line 201 “CV” instead of “VC”
- line 239, a word is missing before “the Florence area”.
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