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Economic Growth Patterns: Spatial Econometric Analysis for Russian Regions†

by Vladimir Balash 1,*, Olga Balash 2, Alexey Faizliev 3 and Elena Chistopolskaya 2
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Submission received: 15 April 2020 / Revised: 18 May 2020 / Accepted: 19 May 2020 / Published: 29 May 2020
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Computer Modelling in Decision Making (CMDM 2019))

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Dear Authors,

I recognized your paper very interesting. However, as a reviewer, I have to show some criticism to your work.

I start with an important issue. Your paper is extended version of a previous work you published at Atlantis Highlights in Computer Sciences, 2, 108-114 in 2019, entitled "Modeling the Spatial Effects of the Impact of Innovation on Regional Economic Growth". I have found and read also that paper. You should: 1) add that work to the reference section in this paper, 2) put citations related to that work in your paper everywhere you copied the text. I compared the work in "Atlantis..." with the text I got to the review. Some parts are in 100% consistent, or with small changes in tenses. It is necessary if you want to avoid a suspection about autoplagiarism.

General comments:

I really appreciate work you have done. It is interesting and well-done econometric analysis. Review of the papers related to this topic consists key-papers and is sufficient. The set of cited papers has also several Russian works, for example O.Demidova (2015,2018). As an addition, a book about spatial convergence by G.Arbia should be cited too.

The section Methodology:

1) It should be ordered in other way. I suggest to remove lines 114-119 and put them after the line 133. It is more logical to talk about spatial dimension of phenomena at the beginning, and then how to represent this dimension in models.

2)In line 165 put the citation (Moran 1950, 1954).

The section Empirical Analysis:

1) line 219 - I know that "subject" is a copy-paste from Russian language, but "subjects" sounds strange in English. Please, replace it with, for example "administrative units".

2) Line 220: Statistics for Crimea and Sevastopol are still available at the Ukrainian Statistical Office site. But I think, for non-scientific reasons it is better not to analyse these regions.

3) Line 225: is GDP per capita in current prices or in fixed prices? Due to high inflation rate at 2015 in Russia, we can always show positive GDP growth, while real Russian economy was shrinking at that time.

4) Line 251: Specialization clusters - can you describe them? What are their economic profile?

5) Line 281: which regions are neighbours of Kaliningrad Oblast? Polish and Lithuanian? Or somehow connected to Russian? It should be explained in the footnote.

6) Tables 3-6 should be more clear. Remove "the spatial lag" with proper symbols in models specifications in formulas in lines 194-203. In tables you use "SLM", in description you have "SAR". I can't find estimates for "delta" in tables; I guess it is described as "The spatial lag log(yi,t)" in the case of SDM model, but there is no spatial lag of log(yi,t) in the specification of SAC model, so I don't understand how you got that result. You should correct all these errors.

Discussion and conclusion is clear for me. I have no more comments to them.

Author Response

Please see the attachment.

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 2 Report

  • The concepts of beta-convergence and sigma-convergence in the beginning of section 2 need to be clarified and better explained, namely the sentence in line 38 “the sigma-convergence implies a decrease in the per capita distribution of gross regional product (GDP)” is confused and not rigorous. Also, the sentence about beta-convergence is confused “the beta-convergence is based on the Solow model [1], which implies a reduction in GDP variance per capita or the same other characteristics of income over time”.
  • Section 3: lines 113 and 114 – should mention the several criterions that define contiguity. Should mention that the elements in the diagonal of W are equal to zero in order to be consistent with equations that follow.
  • The sentence in lines 169 -171 is confused. What is Z? Should be clarified.
  • The description of a Moran’s scatter is basic and well-known information therefore should be removed.
  • Line206 – reference is missing in the reference list.
  • Lines245 and 246 – reference is missing in the reference list.
  • Tables should include notes about the acronyms used, the meaning of the stars, etc…
  • The authors should explain why they split the estimations in 2 periods: 2010-2014 and 2014-2017.
  • When referring to the adjacency matrix the authors should clarify which criterion used (queen, rook?)
  • Clarify the sentence in lines 344 and 345 “then the direct effects turn out to be much more indirect”.
  • Correct some typos and improve the readability of the paper.

Author Response

Reviewer #1: The concepts of beta-convergence and sigma-convergence in the beginning of section 2 need to be clarified and better explained, namely the sentence in line 38 “the sigma-convergence implies a decrease in the per capita distribution of gross regional product (GDP)” is confused and not rigorous. Also, the sentence about beta-convergence is confused “the beta-convergence is based on the Solow model [1], which implies a reduction in GDP variance per capita or the same other characteristics of income over time”.

The σ-convergence implies a decrease in differences between regions over time. That is, we can talk about the presence of a trend towards equalization of levels of economic development in a long-term opportunity. Appropriate measurements are used to measure the  σ- convergence of the unweighted ordinary difference, variant coefficient, Gini index, Tail index, etc.  The β-convergence suggests that poor regions grow faster than rich ones and therefore catch up with them.β-convergence is based on the Solow model [1], which implies that production factors tend to have diminishing returns. Thus, the growth process should bring the economies of the regions to a long-term stable state, the growth rates of which depend only on the (exogenous) rates of technological progress and labor force growth.

 Reviewer #1: A. Section 3: lines 113 and 114 – should mention the several criterions that define contiguity. Should mention that the elements in the diagonal of W are equal to zero in order to be consistent with equations that follow

The weights express the neighbor structure between the observations as a n×n matrix W in which the elements wij of the matrix are the spatial weights:

W=

The spatial weights  wij  are non-zero when i and j are neighbors, and zero otherwise. By convention, the self-neighbor relation is excluded, so that the elements in the diagonal of W are equal to zero.  Which is quite natural, since the weight matrix is designed to reflect the influence of other regions.

In our  analyses we use the spatial weights  in so-called row-standardized form. Row-standardization takes the given weights wij (e.g, the binary zero-one weights) and divides them by the row sum:

.

As a result, each row sum of the row-standardized weights equals one. Also, the sum of all weights, S0=∑ij wij, equals n, the total number of observations  (Anselin, 2014).

Contiguity means that two spatial units share a common border of non-zero length. Operationally, we can further distinguish between a rook and a queen criterion of contiguity, in analogy to the moves allowed for the such-named pieces on a chess board.  The rook criterion defines neighbors by the existence of a common edge between two spatial units. The queen criterion is somewhat more encompassing and defines neighbors as spatial units sharing a common edge or a common vertex. Therefore, the number of neighbors according to the queen criterion will always be at least as large as for the rook criterion.  When constructing a geographic adjacency matrix for regions with a common border, we used queen criterion  (Anselin, 1996}.

Reviewer #1: B. The sentence in lines 169 -171 is confused. What is Z? Should be clarified.

An important step in the analysis of the obtained data is the construction of a spatial Moran scattering diagram. The standardized Z-values of the studied parameter are plotted along the abscissa, and the spatial factor W Z along the ordinates.

The diagram shows the regression line WZ by Z, the slope of which is equal to the coefficient of total spatial autocorrelation I with a standardized matrix of weights. The spatial autocorrelation coefficient shows the degree of linear relationship between the vector Z of centered values of the studied parameter and the vector WZ of spatially weighted centered values of the studied indicator in neighboring territories (areas), which is called the spatially lagged vector.

Reviewer #1: C. The description of a Moran’s scatter is basic and well-known information therefore should be removed.

Moran's scatter description has been removed.

Reviewer #1: D. Line206 – reference is missing in the reference list.

The link is added to the reference list.

Reviewer #1: E. Lines245 and 246 – reference is missing in the reference list.

The link is added to the reference list.

Reviewer #1: F.Tables should include notes about the acronyms used, the meaning of the stars, etc…

For Table 2 added:

 sd is standard deviation

For Table 3-6 added:

p-value 0.1 to 0.05 is *,

p-value 0.05 to 0.01 is **, p-value <0.01 is ***

 

Reviewer #1: G. The authors should explain why they split the estimations in 2 periods: 2010-2014 and 2014-2017.

Added to section 4.2:

We split the estimations in 2 periods: 2010-2014 and 2014-2017, because we were interested to see how economic sanctions against Russia affected the interaction between its regions.

Reviewer #1: H. When referring to the adjacency matrix the authors should clarify which criterion used (queen, rook?)

Added to section 3:

When constructing a geographic adjacency matrix for regions with a common border, we used queen criterion.

Reviewer #1: I. Clarify the sentence in lines 344 and 345 “then the direct effects turn out to be much more indirect”.

This phrase has been removed.

 

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

I accept your paper.

Author Response

Thanks for the review.

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