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On the Unification of Common Actigraphic Data Scoring Algorithms

by Piotr Biegański 1,2,*, Anna Stróż 1, Marian Dovgialo 1, Anna Duszyk-Bogorodzka 1 and Piotr Durka 1
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Submission received: 30 June 2021 / Revised: 25 August 2021 / Accepted: 17 September 2021 / Published: 21 September 2021

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

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Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

We are sorry for not marking the changes in the manuscript. Addressing all the valuable remarks  related to the readability and clarity of the text required changing the order of presentation, to start with the proposed framework and clearly present our findings within this context. Therefore we were not able to reasonably mark the changes in the resubmitted version, where the order and wording was significantly changed. Below we address separately all the technical remarks, pointing out to the positions in the revised manuscript where applicable.

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Reviewer 2 Report

This is a valuable Article presenting the unification of mathematical formalisms of different techniques of Actigraphic Data scoring and analysis. The Authors put a lot of effort into analyzing the similarities between the selected computational techniques, and they finally presented their view and the recipe for a simplified version of the algorithm that combines all the studied methods. In the reviewer's opinion this is high quality paper which also presents a valuable critical approach to some algorithms, explaining exactly the causes of the problems, including for example resampling and potential aliasing problems.
It would be interesting and good for the reader (if possible) to supplement the results with some comparative graphics taking into account selected models and Autor's unification.

Author Response

We are sorry for not marking the changes in the manuscript. Addressing all the valuable remarks  related to the readability and clarity of the text required changing the order of presentation, to start with the proposed framework and clearly present our findings within this context. Therefore we were not able to reasonably mark the changes in the resubmitted version, where the order and wording was significantly changed. Below we address separately all the technical remarks, pointing out to the positions in the revised manuscript where applicable.

As for the comparative graphics, we reorganized Figure 1 and added one more figure in the Discussion.

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